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Awesome

The guitar melody is really catchy but the drums really saved the song, some crazy stuff you had going on there. I like the cowbell that randomly came in throughout the song.

5/5
9/10
and downloaded

-M

Hades responds:

Yeah, this time I thought to myself: "What would an over-talented and hyperactive drummer do if you let him off his leash?", and this came out of my head. I decided to keep the heavier part a bit lighter on drum complexity to keep the listener's head from exploding, however. ;D

Glad you liked it and, as always, thanks for reviewing!

nice

you did much better on variation and harmonies :) and things blended well together for the most part. Might want to look into a more contrasting instrument when putting a harmony to a melody you know? makes the song more "3d".

Since this is supposed to be a dance music you should blast out the kick in the percussion more for a rave like effect.

and btw lol, 14 has nothing to do with it, I started making music when I was 14 as well so you're not the only one. It just seems like you're using it as an excuse or (depending on the way you see yourself) as self glorification as to how awesome you see your music as...

Most people on NG have been making music since around that age anyways.

anyways 9/10, 4/5

keep it up :D
-M

pretty cool

Everything in the song was pretty well done, the mastering, choice of synths the beat.

Something you're missing on is composition. The melody was pretty much the same through the whole song, you should look into variation or adding some harmonies. Without these things the song becomes background music.

I'm giving a 7 cuz everyone else gave a 10 ;p, they left you no room to improve.
also gave 4/5

Keep it up!

-M

Don't stop

This is very good, I can only imagine what the rest of the song will be like unfortunately and am eager to hear the rest of that 40 second preview,
Im giving a 9 because I dont want to give a 10 on a preview, so I'm using the buildup around 00:28 as my criticism, didnt feel strong enough.

I sincerely hope this makes it to newgrounds, dont have the money to buy this :D

-M

Mrmilkcarton responds:

Who knows, depends on how it goes. Might make the preview longer over time.

Great

You wrote this excellently and it sounds great but some things you should tune up and this song will be great.

In the intro you used a piano to accent the piano melody, considering how most of this song is epic i think you should of maybe used a different instrument or maybe some effects to the accent, but that accent should really come out more.

Your transitions are a bit abrupt but not too bad.

I think you should have more variation in instruments, at one point itll be just piano then another itll just be strings.

ooo a pad would sound nice or just something to fill in the silence of the background, epic songs like this should really loud powerful moments in them and i was waiting for it but was never really satisfied.

Bottom line, this song is pretty good as is but can be just plain incredible if you just smooth things out :D

8/10
4/5

-M

DofS responds:

Thank you very much for your helpful advice. :)

needs more

The foundation is strong, but i think you should change some intruments and defenitely needs to be re-mastered, things arent blending in too well.

Other than that its good :D

-M

whaa?

5 seconds of madness

doesnt feel like teletubbies though lol

I like :D

I agree with some of the people who said it was too repetitive and that it kept building up but i dont know, the melody feels really catchy. It's a simple song that doesnt really need more added to it.

I really dont like at 0:30 when it randomly stops then starts again with the same tune... other than that it wasnt bad, maybe some FX will make it more interesting?

hey if you have time and check out my songs I'll love you forever lol

Looking forward to the final

-M

wow

You're the it the quality is shit but it's actually pretty good lol. Id like to see a brushed up version of this :D

Review my songs?

-M

JimmyGonzo responds:

aha thanks man , ill review your stuff when im gonna be home ! (i cant here the computer is sheiiitt )

Just needs a little EQ work

it feels really good but everything is feeling unbalanced, like when the beat comes in it feels washed out by the bass and througout the song it feels hollow. There are some harmonies which can be brought out, some melodies which should be turned down etc. Bottom line

Everything for a great song is there, just fix volume levels and the EQ and you're cool :D

btw it's MAC8 lol

-M

Hades responds:

Yeah, EQing this song was hell since my new laptop really sucks when it comes to sound. However, the bass was supposed to be heavier than the other sounds, I was going for a dark, aggressive atmosphere, and what's better to accomplish that than a gut-grinding bass-line? ;D

Also, fixed the typo, thanks for mentioning it. XD

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